Analyze This

Analyze this and tell me what it says 2 u?

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=380024

This poem speaks volumes. I sense that the author was in love with someone who has either gone away or has died. The writer is in pain and wonders why they continue to look for the person when they know that they aren't there. The writer has become depairing and may be conscidering suicide an answer. It's a beautiful poem. Who wrote it?

XxX))Eclipse((XxX

I wrote it

[Always overshadowed by Bobby-Shanks... ]

So, you wrote it? It's an excellent piece, and as Bob put it, very deep. Now tell us, what was your intention in this poem regarding the context [who's right - Phil, Eclipse or Bob?]?

XxX))Eclipse((XxX

I feel that there's a sense of taking comfort in the pain that's being being felt - sometimes pain is preferable to letting go completely. Letting go releases the closeness of the emotional attachment; thus 'harsh the word to end the tormenting pain'.

Well when i wrote this I thougt of Death,Not Beacuse there was a loss of a person I Love.
But of my self.

Darkness Befalls me.
Veils upon thine eyes.
Words of truth can't be heard.
Here it is standing in My path.
Why do I seek thee.
My soul can't explain.
Harsh is the word.
To end this tormenting pain.

I meant dark toughts have invaded me.
My eyes have been blinded by the truth.
Of many ways to do it.
And how to do it.
And yet half of me does not understand why I think about it.
Harsh is the Word.
The word is Suicide
To end all sorrows.
All pains.

JPM: She didn't mean that line in the sense you took it. She was describing the word she was implying, rather than saying that the word "harsh" was the solution to her pain...
You write wonderful stuff, JPM, but analysing poetry is not your strong point I see.

XxX))Eclipse((XxX

I'm sorry perhaps I misunderstood you.
When I wrote this piece I was Thinking of the word Suicide.
wich Harsh is the word that I used instead of suicide.

Suicide is the word.
To end this Tormenting Pain.

Trapped in darkness, confused....

DFK

the poem is really neat. i wouldn't have guessed that the harsh word was suicide though, but now that i know it is it's creative the way you put it, deep too. but when i first read the pain the first thing that came to my mind was an abusive relationship for some odd reason but i've been off key all day it seems i'm living off of barely any sleep today

~Jacklyn

sounds like you're being hidden from something but it's hurting you.

Many things are in mind. Sometimes we become overwhelmed by emotions and we seek a way out, we feel trapped in our inner selves.To Hurt no more.To empty a full Vase that never seems to stop filling it's self. To stop the what if's and the why's. And a HARSH solution to end all pains.