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Hey can you r/r/c on my poem
*Innocent Girl
*Our Get Away
thanks and ill check out some of yours if you would like....just comment on mine so i know how many....luv yas mwah...thanks

-kayla-

Would you please read Downward Spiral Thanx I appreciate it!

When you have time comment on:
Best friend(my new poem i wrote it when i sick and in a deep depression)
The guy from ice-cream store

Oh and if you interested you can read some of my feautered poems!
thanks

Thank you very much for your comments and for correcting my grammatical mistakes if you'll take a look i changed it. English it's not my native language it's just something I learn as subject at school. But I enjoy writing poems...