FREE RATES AND COMMENTS

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Come on :)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    sure :)

  • Kayla
    20 years ago

    Hey you can rate and comment on my poems...particularly...
    *Innocent Girl
    *Our Get Away
    *My Life
    *Changed Forever
    and any others you would like thanks....and ill return the favor to who ever comments on mine...thanks luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Hey, man you got alot of reading lol :)
    we close 2 fame!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    why?
    it was all your idea and the amount a deadly poems i read!!!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    read up man all the ones listed :)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    they all pretty good..enjoy im still reading :)

  • Katie
    20 years ago

    would you read my poems, atleast my newest one. I dont have any comments yet...

  • Katie
    20 years ago

    lol
    Thanks.
    You guys are so nice.
    You rock!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Oh yeah James Stacie is gonna help us is that k with you?

    x)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    katie im moving on to yours now and kayla i think i did yours :)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    ok =) and stacie rocks!

    now go read man!!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    all done x)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Yeah it rocks and is really enjoyable :)
    thanks James for letting me be a part of it :)

    so anymore poems?

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    enjoy brookes shes great i'd love to someday be as deadly as her!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    thats good :)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    hey James were bouts you?

  • Hans Fausto
    20 years ago

    hey there..i would appreciate it if you would have a look at my poems:D...tnx a bunch:D

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    sure we did them :D

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Welcome :)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    yep any time now :)

    i already got a gold D...

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    does it? i didn't even notice me getting them, lol.

    you got a C :)

    so did you enjoy reading?

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    if we keep it at the top the requests come rolling in :)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    right man i gotta sleep lol..
    its 5.35 am...

    il check in tomorrow :)

    x)

  • Lydia O
    20 years ago

    OK, I only have 3 poems posted here but the most unusual and intriguing would be:

    Journey on a Desert Train

    And if you would care to see the graphics I created to accompany this poem, go to:

    http://lydiao.beplaced.com/Journey/journey.htm

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    do it for you tomorrow lydia o....

    bye bye James *yawn*

  • Jessica Rauen
    20 years ago

    Hey...

  • Hans Fausto
    20 years ago

    tnx for the comments guys :D

  • katie!
    20 years ago

    If you have a chance please comment on four of my featured, much appreciated and will return the favour as soon as I get the chance..

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    hans:welcome.
    jessica:any poems?
    Katie:sure:)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Anyone there?

  • NannO
    20 years ago

    hey all.. plz someone read my featured and my two latest.. or any poem of those if its too much.. ill get on most of urz a.s.a.p
    thnx in advance
    nouna

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Sure broken Il get on it now :)

  • Renee
    20 years ago

    heh...I got a shitload of poems for ya'll

    "Too Late, You're Gone"

    "My Teddy Bear Love Story" all 3 parts

    "Empty Promises"

    "Hospital Love"

    "Mass Confusion"

    I'm sure theres more, just look at the dates and if they were written in the last few days you can comment on them :-)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    sure renee im off to do them now:)

    and broken i did yours :)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Hey, Renne I did yours! I loved the teddy bear series!!

  • Renee
    20 years ago

    :-D thanks! I'm about to check yours out right now...:-)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Ya don't have to :)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    But thank you so much Renne :D

    Anymore takers??

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Im really bored so come on give me a poem or two :)