Fair Deal...

Please read these four poems, and i'll return the favor!!!
Daddys little girl
Hope
I'll say good bye
My promise

Please, this means alot to me, and i would love to return the favor. Please, leave honest comments, but please read my profile. If you're going to say i need work on something, please tell me how you think i could improve, and where in the poem it would help most...and then give suggestions! thankss!