plz read my poem

Its called Goodbye

You were the fun of the summer,
Leaving us will be a bummer.

None of us want to cry,
But we won't be shy.

We will cry all night long,
But still try to be strong.

You made everyone laugh,
but it still wasn't enough.

Our summer was the greatest,
because you made it the funniest

Everyone loved your smile,
You could see it from a mile.

But what we will miss,
is the great bliss
Of having you around.

It was a blast from the past with yu this summer.

Goodbye Jordan
Love all of us
The Summer Crew

p.s its still in the making but tell me what you think plz and thank you