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Hey,
Could you guys rate and comment on my new poem "UnKnown" .. Its been a while sents I wrote any poems because I was depressed and I couldnt write down what I felt on a sheet of paper like I use to could.. And now, After about a year.. Ive finally wrote something.. And when I had writers block I got mad at myself.. and put myself down because I couldnt write anymore.. So I through every poem Ive ever written away.. And it was like 30 of them.. But this is the first poem for me now... Maybe things will get back to normal, But If you would.. tell me what you think.. It would really mean alot.

Amanda

yea sure i'll read ur poem...but i would love for you to read one of mines..doesn't matter which ones