Hi! Need Help

- Name : noraida
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : May 8, 2005
- Posts : 56
noraida
20 years ago

Pleaze comment on my poems need to improve there is something missing ...........

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- Name : Delo
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Sep 27, 2004
- Posts : 25
Delo
20 years ago

commented on 2 of them ;) ... i think you can do a lil better with sum more expiriance ;)

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