Hey guys, GrEaT deal!

Okay, well i need my poems checked over please a few comments, nothing major just telling me if it's good, bad, or just stop writing.. i dont take anything offensivly. i'll return the favor times 2!!

Hey I'll do it when I get back from class tonight or sometime tomorrow. I'll get my sister (Eclipse) to rate/comment, too.

I read a few....so nice! ;)