...just open the thread. Geez.

Okay, I'd like some serious writers who want CRITIQUE or CRITICISM to give some things to read.

I don't want you to "r/c" or vote on my stuff or anything like that unless YOU see fit- I'm not a poetry whore, and I don't want poetry whores asking me to read their stuff.

I will tell you flat-out if it sucks, so don't tempt me with bad work!!!

I'm just interested in what everyone's got out there.

♥Niki

come one come all......

(by the way,that sounded so fake)

IM probably not to good but if you could would you rate my newest one its Titled Just another day withot you. I will gladly go rate yours

yeah I know for a fact my poems aren't the best and if you feel like it could you comment on them. Not forcing it onto you haha I'de just like to here what people tihnk of them.

Could you check out The River and/or On the Meadow of Silence?

Thanks=)

*Broken Wings
*Suicides Lover (Part I, II and III)
I'm submitting poetry to try and improve, i want people to read the stuff i write and enjoy it but i need a little help !! xxx ~*~ Sorry 'bout this coming up twice !!!

*Broken Wings
*Suicides Lover (Part I, II and III)
I'm submitting poetry to try and improve, i want people to read the stuff i write and enjoy it but i need a little help !! xxx ~*~

My Dear Angel

its my newest piece of work and id love some real critcism on it! thanks

haha ok sounds good, i have a thread like this "constructive poetry" haha, but newayz if you could do "liquid rose" i'll get on yours right now! thanks!

"artificial is the new real..."

yes please read mine