please...

hey people
id really appreciate it if you rated and commented on my poems. i'll return the favor. maybe we could make a deal? thanks

ill do that, n if u would, please comment on my poems with the least comments.. thnx.

ok, ill do that

lol no crits? u only told me how good they were; that doesnt help me grow now does it. lol well thanks, its the idea that counts.. tell me what u think about the gun shot idea i suggested..

i like that, i start puttin stuff like that into some of my newer poems