Poem critiques/feedback

two of my best poems, i believe are "Danse Macabre," and "Prismatic." If anyone would tell me anything i might need to change, any inconsistencies in these, i would greatly appreciate it and will certainly return the favor, just lemme know whats up. thankx.. pZ

Will check them out right away :) nice to know sumone else wants an honest opinion

i read your poems and theyre all amazing, as i commented. thanx for the crits,.. to everyone else,.. id still like some helpful comments on these.. whether good or bad..