please vote! 1 for 2

i have a new poem that needs attention. please AT LEAST vote, its called "suicidal love" and i'll do 2 of your choice, and however you comment on mine is how i'll comment on yours, thanks in advance!

good poem...i agree you should work on the rhyme a little.

Whoa omg sorry i've been busy all day so i'm on it, haha no i didnt take it the wrong way!! i can take critism, lol if you think it sucked thats your choice, lol so no harsh feelings :) i'm gettin ya all right now!