Can any of you R/C/V my poems please? I have talent...

  • Avrii Monrielle
    20 years ago

    I am very talented,I know many of you have good critique... I wanna get a silver award so much for poetry... thanks...

    I especially would like if you could read:
    When all of us were still kids
    ----
    Its beautiful

    I also have this poem that needs a name:

    The fire in my eyes
    Burns brightly colored blue
    For the shades of suntime
    Keep shining through
    And the fury milling pain
    I am still standing strong
    As I will never move
    Standing here all day long

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