cinquains

i wrote a couple cinquains
thay are short
they are "sunrise" and "life"
i would really appriciate it if you could all check them out and tell me how i did
they are short
so no worries
thank you to those who take the few minutes out of their day to check them out

...please....?

if you comment on my poems

dreams and
Ruined

i'll comment on yours :)

okay you got yourself a deal i will get right on it =)