YoU & ME

this is a poem that i wrote for my ex i would appreciate it if you would vote and maybe drop a note....and i'll do the same just tell me which one

kisses

ok =)....could you please read either 'Make Sure I Experience Pain' or 'Fighting back the tears'

hey, i read your poem and i thought it was pretty good...the flow was just kind of choppy....but i can understand that, i'm horrible with flow lol....keep up the good work, i gave you a 4 =)

by the way, this was my favorite stanza:

"I used to look into your eyes
and feel you were the one
but now I'm sitting here
with these emotions so strong"

sorry i didn't comment on the actual poem, for some reason whenever i go to certain categories, i always get logged out...

done...i commented and voted on your poem....great job...

ANYBODY ELSE>>>?????

my new one follow your heart

done wendy....great poem by the way....anyone else?