Sonnets

I am experimenting writing sonnets. I have 2 thaey are "trust" and "Love once lost" If you would read them and tell me how to improve I would be happy to give you a long comment on atleast one or two of your poems. I really only want people that know something about the sonnet writing style and about the Iambic pentameter to comment, as I want to conform to the correct style. Thank you.

sorry for the long critique on your first sonnet, if i have time, i will try to read your other one