My newest poems

Please read my two newest poems, they are really good! lol they're
Sweet Sixteen
I need my dadd here, (cuz hes still part of me)

I WILL return the favor, but u have to comment on mine first, cuz lately, i've been commenting on pplz, and no one is commenting back. so i want to make sure things are fair. but dont worry, i WILL comment back.

anyone?