Monkey on my back

alright,.. i just wrote a new poem today.. it isnt really what u usually see,.. it doesnt really have any type of form, and seldom rhymes.. i havent been able to think of anything to write lately and i just started writing and this came out. id like ur comments, and i will return the favor for sure,... thanx..

woot! i love monkeys! lol i'm hoping this has something to do with monkeys lmao please raed my poem, My jaded forest, or i need my daddy here cuz hes still part of me, OR sweet sixteen. which ever one u want ;)

I'm going have to say that was very interesting! I have to ask, did you actually sit down and think of that or was it something that like just came to you out of the blue? Cuz I've had some thoughts like that before, but I was scared to write some of that stuff down!...lmao...:)

there were no thoughts about this piece before i started writing,.. now.. so no one's mislead.. monkey on your back is an expression that relates to any bad habit,.. i used drug addiction as the main theme, but as in this piece, and in my life, this isnt the only 'monkey on my back''.. thanks for readin and commentin..