1 for 2???

Okay i'm back people and this is my last account i guess my other one got suspended and the other one i hated for some odd reason so people please go comment on my poem i have

before they give away

and i'll 2 of your choice for poems. thanks alot.

i read and commented, but i'd have to tell you that I had a bit of trouble getting through a few of your lines. you might want to consider reading your poem out loud and seeing if there is any editing you want to do.

i'll comment on yours

could you comment on

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Fat and Me

thanks!

my poem please......dances with angels....i'll read one of yours....

thanks guys..i'll read yours tomorrow because i'm so tired and i just checked on this. So i promise i'll get to them tomorrow when i have time.