Losing Hope / On Top

I have 2 poems, "Losing Hope" and "On Top". I wrote losing hope a few weeks ago when i was totally depressed, and i wrote On Top like 2 days ago when i thought to myself that i should start a new life. Id appreciate comments & ratings on them, and id rate & comment on any poem of urs promise! And i want honest comments, so if somethings wrong in it, its appreciated if u say it as they both mean a lot to me :)

Rob x