Erotic poems need to be read

I want anyone who likes erotic, sexual poems to read some of my work. I would be tahnkful if you could comment.

i did three or so thanks for your comment on mine

Yay! I am now rated 4.0. and at least know what I've done wrong. I know I'm not great, but at least I try. Thanks to all who've really taught me how to improve, even if they've given me 1s (but I hate it when you simply get 1s, and no feedback, except: eww, omg)