A 2x1 offer.

If you read one of my poems, and do a constructive commentary, I'll r.r.c 2 of urs. If you do all of mine, I'll read up to 20, if you wish.

I'll do constructive commentaries, not just "Good, keep it up." but something that can really help you improve.

Ahh... Another desperate one. Anyways, do check this guy's poems out. They are hilarious, what a pimp!

Yep, I'm desperate. I only get voted 1s randomly and some get 5s, 3s, etc. I really need to learn how to improve. Giving me 1s or 2s doesn't really help, unless you tell me what I've done wrong.

Thanks for all who've commented.... really commented! on my work. I really appreciate. Next time I write a poem, I'll consider all your suggestions. Thanks a lot Jamie, you are just great. Brit and CHyenne, thanks as always.