Const. Criticism given for crits received

i've got two new poems, tracing infinity and monkey on my back,.. any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism of either of these with actual thought and substance i get, ill comment on a piece or two of yours in return.. thanks

i did one, im going to do the other i already read through it but i will take my time later to try to interperate what i think it means but that takes thinking and i am tired...your really good though i can tell ya that i might not be of much help but i sure can tell ya what i think....later

k did a few of yours.. good job and thanks for commentin..

you can do a few a mine..:)