The Tears of Things (Lachrymae Rerum)

I would be more than thankful if anyone would comment on this poem of mine, it is very long, but I would appreciate any constructive comments, no need to vote. I will certainly return the favour by reading and commenting on at least two of your poems. The poem is still in its infancy, so I am still working on a consistent rhyme scheme. Please do not comment on that random rhymes sometimes present, and please do not just say: "Good job! Nice poem! 5/5" I would really be thankful.

Wow man! Yep, that's the way to go!!! It was too long, so my useless brain couldn't continue, but I will post a comment soon mate. Keep it up!