Again hehe

k can you all read umm *desperate...oposite* its a new thing for me ive never not rhymed before kinda odd i wanna know if its alright or just flat out insanly stupid

if you do that i will comment on 3 of yours if not more...i will actually give real comments not simple good job keep it ups....

I'm up for it...I need comments on as many as your willing to do. One I want to improve and two I want to start being well known around here...I'm tired of just, being here. I want people to know my name......I'll go through a few of yours.

Forever I Remain,
Sheena

O.K.... Done! Very well written but i dont know if thats a rhyme? interesting though!

k, i got u covered.. ur lacking or rhymes was a breath of fresh air and the poem as a whole was a good read.. good job and id like to see you try some different styles..

okay, i've told you what I think about it. well actually let me say something that might not have come across in my comment. I liked your free verse poem, and thought it was pretty well done. I gave a suggestion as to how you could improve it (in my opinion), and it'd be pretty easy to do. but even if you're not looking for advice, I just wanted to say that it was pretty nice.