3 for 5???

Okay everyone i have put 3 new well old poems up and i wanted you guys to read them please and it might really take me a while because i still gotta read someone's other poems and then this also i'm sick so i'm trying to work as fast as i can. thanks alot though.

3 parts of life
thinking about you
Once Your Wife

and whatever 5 you want me to read i'll try asap when i'm done everything and try to do everything quick.

sure i'll read them no problem i appreciate your comments thanks

I've read your three poems and left some suggestions as to improvements/corrections. If you could take a look at any 5 of my featured poems, i'd appreciate it.

Look at any five you wish to....whatever sticks out to you, I suppose. I'll do your three, perhaps more if I have the time. :)

DarkSuicide

would you read this one i just wrote last caress and tell me what you think i'll return the favor thanks