Enslavements goodbye=(

  • EoB
    18 years ago

    It is truly sad to announce that this may be my last visit here for a long time...I am not leaving until tuesday, but I don't think I will have any oppurtunity to stay in here for much more than a few minutes now as I fail to enter internet at home...

    I have enjoyed my stay here more than you can imagine...Many of you have become dear to me, more than I expected...

    I have so many people to thank, and cannot think of any better way to thank them than through a poem...sadly, I have not the time to write about each and everyone of you...so..here is a poem to those who I have come to know better than the others...I will write a better and longer one, hopefully, but at the time being, you'll have to settle with this=(

    Within these words,
    within these stanzas,
    is hidden the love
    that I have come to feel.

    Be they not great
    they are all I can offer.
    the voice of my heart
    surpasses my skill.

    I have not the time
    to offer you justice,
    but here I bestow
    a stanza to each.

    This one to Sunny.
    Such love for all living.
    Magnificent poet.
    Spreader of joy.

    This one to Chris,
    though hardly I know him,
    I name him my friend,
    and a poet of class.

    This to give credit,
    to Jason, the poet,
    in awe I behold
    whatever you write.

    This, here, to chelsea,
    and what she has written.
    Seldom have letters
    meant more, than did her`s

    This one to Jacki,
    not that I know her,
    but if not for her help,
    no words would I write.

    This, in the honor,
    of Bob Shank, the wisest.
    His words, wise or silly,
    from wisdom's well come.

    Here is a stanza,
    to my dear Angelina.
    In sunshine or rain,
    she stands by my side.

    and finally I write
    in the honor of someone,
    who's beauty within
    reflects in her looks.

    To where my road takes me,
    I can only imagine,
    but wherever I am,
    she I'll recall.

    You have all made a difference,
    but this is still deeper.
    To lose contact with Brooke,
    will torment my heart.

    No justice do these stanzas,
    offer to such as you
    They are but the simple words
    of a humble man.

    Farewell, then, I bid you,
    though you may forget me,
    my thoughts to your words
    oft shall return.

  • EoB
    18 years ago

    I do not know, Angelina...

    I doubt I will continue writing poems, at least not for a few months...

  • Atomic
    18 years ago

    Aww, you're leaving them!

    P.S. I noticed my name wasn't mention in your little poem! =P

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • EoB
    18 years ago

    Atomic: Too little time, too many names...

    Well thank you Angelina, though your words are far too kind...You are a better writer than me, at least as I see it...

  • EoB
    18 years ago

    sluvious...has Bob been drinking again?

  • Atomic
    18 years ago

    Haha, no need to explain. After all, we hardly know one another.

    I wish you luck with whatever that is you plan to do with your life.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • EoB
    18 years ago

    thank you very much...=)

  • EoB
    18 years ago

    I will be back, but I have no idea when...not soon enough...

  • Atomic
    18 years ago

    Time flies, you'll be back in no time.

    I'll keep your seat warm for you until you return.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • XxXangeltearsXxX
    18 years ago

    aw i dont know you but its sad when people leave...good luck doing whatever it is you are planning to do.

  • Kaitlin Kristina
    18 years ago

    I am glad that you are leaving in better circumstances than which you came.

    You know you're a true talent. Take it and do something good with it, I want to pick your book off the shelf someday.

    Love ya, Enslavement.

  • EoB
    18 years ago

    my book? that would have been something, wouldn't it?

    "Ten ways to make a meal of your own limbs"

    nice

  • Steven Beesley
    18 years ago

    EOB, Take care buddy! It won't be that long, keep your chin up and see you soon.

  • Forgotten Memory
    18 years ago

    i never really got to talk to you, but from what ive heard about you, ur a great person and a talented writer. its a shame that you will be gone for an undetermined length of time, but from the looks of it, you will be welcomed back with many open arms. take it easy, be true to urself and good luck with whatever life throws ur way next.

  • Shædow Poet
    18 years ago

    Oh, EOB that is really sad. I'll miss you on this group, although i haven't really come in direct contact with you, I have read some of your poems, and you are amazing.
    Good luck with life, don't forget to never stop writing...

  • Kevin
    18 years ago

    How dramatic.

    But happy trails, keep the wind at your back Shelio.

  • Brookeღ
    18 years ago

    JPM, Enslavement is more of a man than you'll ever be! Your desire for attention is pathetic~

    Take Care Enslavement, you’ll be missed more than you know! Hurry back my friend! I love you!=)

  • Steven Beesley
    18 years ago

    Well said Brooke!!!!

  • Jason Meres
    18 years ago

    Well, no one would know more about that than you, right?

  • Natalie84
    18 years ago

    I'm not trying to sound cool nor am I trying to be a kiss ass but that was absolutely hilarious!!! ^ HAHAHAHAHAHA

  • †JustAri†
    18 years ago

    Enslavement...you suck. You let your severed arm rot away without giving me any, much less slop a tank of gravy over it.

    And then you break the news that you're LEAVING?? I just got back from school to find out an amazing way cool poet is leaving the site. It's a loss that's slicing up my keyboard, man. Feel the guilt!!

    BUT...I will miss you! :( I'm grateful to have come across such a wonderful poet and person as yourself. You are remarkable in every way. Now to end this cheesy goodbye, i will type out the fatal blow of words: Take care. It's not goodbye, just take care. Live a good life.

    And most importantly, SMILE! =)

    ..And i shall miss those infamous blots of Enslavement smilies. =)

    //Ari\\

  • Jason Meres
    18 years ago

    Britt: JHarrison said it best i'm afraid.

    JustPlainMe: I'd better not respond to that, as I was taught to be respectful to my elders. Seeing as how you're, what, eighty-two years older than me, I just don't think it'd be right for either of us. Thanks for your response though, it proved what you've got on the brain better than I could have explained it.

  • Jacklyn
    18 years ago

    well i have only read about two or three of your poems but they were enjoyable. i hope that you don't give up writing because you do have talent to write. so even if you do leave the site continue to fill the pages with endless ink! come back if you can many will miss you and we will be glad to see your return. good luck with your poetry and with everything else.

    ~Jacklyn

  • JJ
    18 years ago

    well...don't know what else to say. your talent will definitely be missed around here. good luck to you and take care.

  • Tammy
    18 years ago

    EOB I am sorry to hear you are leaving us. Your poetry is so amazing. Believe me, you will be missed by a lot of us here. Take care & I wish you all the best.
    Tammy