erotic ....but please read and comment....truths only plzzz

plz take a look at my poems..........erotic ....but please read and comment....truths only plzzz.can`t decide to give up or not.to me there simple & plain.boring in other words. let me know so i can try other things or stick at it

i read two of them can't say i've read some poems like that before but they were good gave im 5/5