please comment mine please

  • Green M&M
    20 years ago

    i need people to comment my poems cause i really need some critiques please please

    Desire`*^

  • Bunny
    20 years ago

    hey if u tell me the name ill comment on 1

  • Green M&M
    20 years ago

    my poem is named "suicidal girl! thats me"
    thanks please comment