Please read.

I did sort of a poem about a "lost relationship" with a murder twist... But I made it rhyme with the same word 16 times. Hard work it was but i managed to get it done... The poem is titled "In the end of the end."
By me... Of course... I'm just looking for feedback on the poem and the style I used... All is welcomed. Your feedback will help me better myself in the future.

sure, ill read it

Thank you, I'll get reading one of yours aswell.

I read "HE Had Other Plans"
Great stuff... Never stop writing.
Commented... And Rated.

Oh an btw... I added you to my favorites before you did me lol...