okay i wrote a new poem called "makeshift" and uhhh "dead=love" check them out and give me a good comment i will not respond to "good work keep it up" but if you leave a decent comment on eihter one you dont have to do both i will comment on +3 or more+
sorry i've gotta go now.. but i will comment on your other one later for sure(you have my word on that); as for the one i read: it was excellent.. but if you would, comment on trap-door veil or dancer of the clearing,.. or both.. thankyamuch
i believe i have already done "trap door veil" some time ago but i did "dancer of the clearing" as well as three other ones i really enjoy reading your work!
