More to read ....reading and rateing yours in return

Hi all just posted a few more of my older poems i would really love some feedback on them if you read rate and coment i promise ill do the same for you just really dieing for some input since i havnet put my stuff out to the public befor thanks for your time
Dave

many more added tonight hope ya all enjoy thanks again
Dave

sure. i'll check out your poetry.
See ya!
beth.