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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    I just finsihed your poem, NotingBrokenButMyHeart, and I just have to recommend the poem "Nothing Broken" it's just so cute.

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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Hansrik, that poem was absolutely outstanding! I recommend it to the whole world.

    "Lachrymae Rerum"

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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    SexyMeister69:

    I felt insulted to have read your poem. How dare you use poetry for your own selfish needs!

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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Ria, I just finished your poems,and they are just amazing!

    I recommend the poem "The Lie" to everyone.

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  • GoodMorning
    20 years ago

    my new poem, "This Just Isn't My Day"...i'd like suggestions, if you have any, i have a terrible time getting my poems to flow nicely...

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    You're welcome Ashley.

    And Lovely Insanity, I just finished your poem and the suggestions are in there with the comment.

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  • GoodMorning
    20 years ago

    thank you atomic =)

  • Dark Kitten
    20 years ago

    Please read:

    E-mail Blues
    Sweet Agony
    &
    Dreamland

    Thanks, Ashley

    love the bunny by the way. so cute ^_^

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Ashley I just finished with your poems. Job well done. and thank you, M'Dear.

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  • LadyPearl
    20 years ago

    I added you to my favorites, nice job.
    please check out Empty soul

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Thank you Noni for the honour and I have just checked out "Empty Soul" very nicely done M'Dear.

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  • Wip lost the Rhythm
    20 years ago

    if you could comment on my two newest poems

    you bought his lies
    A helping Hand

    that would be great and i would comment back on yours comment for comment

  • Falling Up
    20 years ago

    HEY! can u pretty please, rate/comment my poem Reckless Emotion, and Killing me softly.... thankyou .. critisizm is welcome, as well as praise lol.. if u do that for me, i will definitely comment on yr poems too! thanks so much!!! -falling

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Bleeding_torn_abused:

    I just finished reading your poems. =)

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  • nikki
    20 years ago

    ok will u read "why?" and "Bye"

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Falling Up, your poems were very nice. I especially like "Killing Me Softly".

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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    There you go Nicole. I just finished with your poems. I especially like the poem "Why?".

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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Yeah, I just read it. It's pretty good.

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  • Jonathan
    20 years ago

    can you read "Too late" please , thank you

  • BeeJay
    20 years ago

    "If only..."
    "Love at first sight"

    If you want to read more, I would love it, but those are the two I want to hear more comments on. Thank you so much in advance.

    ~BJ~

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Okay, I just finished your poem Jon. =)

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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    I just finished yours too James, I heart the choice of topic.

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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    1loveachother, I just finished yours also. =)

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  • BeeJay
    20 years ago

    Thank you for the comments. And thanx for correcting my mistakes. I don't read them after I post them, so I don't notice things like that. Thank you a lot! And thank you for being honest too :D
    ~BJ~

  • Rusted x Heart
    20 years ago

    Hey! I love your work and I'd love to see what you have to say about mine. I'd love it if you read any of the following three:

    'Xiomara'
    'Suicide Moon'
    'City Lights'

    Ill be sure to go through your poems again, as I said, I really like your work!

  • Anthony
    20 years ago

    HEY! i have some more genius for you to read! Its called "Show Me" Thanks!

    ~anthony

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Rusted Heart, I just got done reading your poems and I must say, I am very, very impressed. I would recommend you to anyone who likes to read fantasy poems. =)

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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    There Anthony, I just finished your poem and my suggestion is posted with the comment =)

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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Hmmm...no one likes free votes and comments?

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  • LadyPearl
    20 years ago

    Family Portrait

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Done and done. =)

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  • HansRik
    20 years ago

    The immensity of emptiness.

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    I'm done with your request. Very well put.

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  • Princess09
    20 years ago

    "love of your life"
    "girls talk s***"
    "pain of 9/11"
    thx a bunches!!!!! i will return the favor

  • LadyPearl
    20 years ago

    Thanks alot atomic!!

    Can you also r/c Nature's fire

  • Jenn
    20 years ago

    the kiss

    my muse

    baby girl

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Babygurl09, I just finsihed with your poems and all of them had a very powerful ending.

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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    My1&only. Yeah, I just finished your first request. I'm gonna work on the second now.

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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    My1&only. Okay, I'm done with the other poem too.

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  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    Noni, very good poem M'Dear.

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