Spare a moment?

  • Kevin
    19 years ago

    Yo, i need some feedback on this poem as some people have said to me they have no idea whats it's about, or they guess wrong, which is fine...but it just happens to be the headliner for my collection...thoughts would be nice..

    THE MISSING

    All thats ever moved me
    is everything you've read about
    in books by crooks
    and ex war heroes

    you can taste it
    with your popcorn
    as the movies gently hint at
    the magic and the silence
    just everything and all that

    read between
    the lines and scenes
    and without a doubt
    i'm sure you'll see
    there
    as simple as a smile
    and ready to be free
    nestled in a den of thought

    all thats ever moved me.