needing feedback

Howdy do one and all just posted my newest effort its called "Death Note" if any one cares to r/r/c on it for me sure would be great thanks a bunch

Already done it !!!
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(Probably haven't been any help at all though, sorry !!!)

Naw doll thanks a mill anything thats said is help all i need to do is a way to translate it all... lol not saying i didnt understand you lol sorry just gertting myself in deeper now at any rate thanks
Dave