new poem

hey i have a new poem its kinda gay but i put it up so i can get suggestions on how to make it better cuz i know it isnt good right now so if ull r/c on my new poem (featured poem) then ill r/c on any ONE of ur poems thnx well ttyl buh bye

~nikki~

plz ppl i really want some feed back

okay i commented if you could do any of my newer ones that would be great

ok i just r/ced on urs anyone else?