new poem, would LOVE honesty...

what the title said. It's called Toll Past Heaven's Gate, and theres also two others called "Piano" and "Tree In The Middle of the Pavement."
A big thank you to all who do READ.
Oh, and don't be scared to be honest, a little bit more of sincerity never killed anyone.

Good Writing, and Reading!
beth

Nicely written, I commented on 'Toll Past Heaven's Gate' and 'Piano'. Keep up the good work!

Hey, thanks a lot Rusted!
I commented on your spanish poem, and will do more later.
See ya!
beth