constructive criticism, helpful feedback

if anyone would be so kind as to comment on "trap-door veil" and/or "webs of repose," i'll return the favor,.. im lookin for specific crits and suggestions, but any truthful feedback is appreciated.. pZ

i read "trap-door veil" and commented. good job! you are very very talented.

thanks, i read yours as well, and although it;s your only one, its a strong poem.. rework the last two lines and it'll be great..

good read of yours Angelina,.. i liked your poem, and of course gave you my thoughts/opinions/crits.. anyone else?

Would love to.. :)