New poem in Spanish...

Well i posted a new poem in Spanish today which i wrote a while ago, but I'd love for anyone to comment. If you cant read Spanish theres a translation there as well, but it just doesnt seem to covney the emotion properly. Anyway, I'd be sure to return the favour ;) heck you could even read an older poem of mine and I'd be happy.

I read it, I might have made some grammer errors in my comment, like I said I speak little spanish.

DONE...and its really sad...for those who speak spanish...i suggest u read it and for those who don't well u won't understand...its just 100% better in spanish...much more emotion and care...just pick any one of minez to comment and vote on...i don't care which one..