Please read my poems!

It seems like no one likes my poetry, so I got a deal for you peeps. You read mine, I'll read yours. We comment on the poems and ways to improve. Sound good?

done i read 2 of them i hope what i said helps .. your good though and you will get better.. now if you would not mind could you read

slowest form of suicide and
have you ever thought

it would mean a lot thanks