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..hopefully...okay well i wrote a new poem that is titles "Spider Venom" for the moment, i would really like to hear title suggestions but if not a comment and a rating with be fine

give me a reasonable comment or title and i'll comment on 3 of your poems...of your choice

I just did!! AWESOME poem! Check out Morbid Child, This is the House, and My Life...thanks:)

could u r/c on I hate her and to feel alone?

thanks!

k all done........anyone else?

I read it. I think that title fits perfectly! You can pick any two of my poems, but my personal favorites are "The Fourth Month of My Life..." and "Why Don't You Have a Heart?" Thanks in advance.

~BJ~

I just submitted a new poem called "The Girl Behind The Mirror" if you wanna have that be one of the 3, I would greatly appreciate it.

~BJ~

Thank you so much for the comments! They mean a lot to me! They really do!

~BJ~

okay...so i did everybdoies i think...if you did this deal thing and didn't get what I said tell me and i will gladly do my part but i think im done with everyones this far