You Can BET ON IT!!!

hey all.. im sorry i havent bin around lately.. i was reli busy with skul and stuff, but here I am.. again.. i hope u havent forgotten all about me (:P).. so, to refresh ur memory, ive jus written a poem (dun expect too much from it, coz i wrote it in skul and in 10 minutes, so i dunno) but i wud reli appreciate ur very honest comments and voting, and also suggestions bout anything in the text... the poem is "Too Late".. im so gonna return the favor (even ask around, i ALWAYS do:D:D) so plz read it..
take care all and thnx in advance
Nannoush
p.s. im sorry if this is aksing4 too much but can u plz read any of my others too? :$

hey can u pls do

one love
murder or suicide
& each night

I'll read some of your poems, could you comment on; 4 seasons of loneliness.,
Hypnotized
And; Gardian Angel.

Thankyou !!

XxX Cici XxX

heya agen.. amelia, im done with urz.. u too, cici.. pretty gud stuff.. amazing, i shud say...
any other takers??
well.. let me noe :D
and rmmbr.. i always return the favor
Nannoush

none?? cmon guys? werz ur spirit??

hey all.. i din wanna post another new one, so ill write it in here. i hv a new poem.. i jus wrote it 2day.. its called "Sometimes".. plz r/r/c, id reli appreciate any kind of feedback.. constructive criticism is always welcome.. and i always return the favor.. u can jus tell me wich poems u want done 4 u (but quick, coz this offer has an expiry date (before i get too busy agen, till the early days of november)) and ill be sure 2 get on them as soon as possible.. if, in any case, i happen 2 forget, plz remind me...
take care all
nannoush
p.s. plz du post more than 3 poems at once per person..