Bi-Daily Contest - 10/27 to 10/28

  • Samantha
    18 years ago

    Don't post after the date on the thread, otherwise you're just wasting your time.

    Rules, you may ask?

    1. No slang.
    2. One poem per poet per day.
    3. Try to keep 'em short; don't repetedly post huge poems and expect me to read them all the way through.
    4. No explicit poems.
    5. Don't be offended by my final judgement.

    Post your poems here.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    Corridors wind, for miles on end,
    My heart grows heavy, as the stairs descend.
    A trail of tears, fall behind me as I go,
    No one can understand my pain, my whoa.
    The world is dark, and it's so cold,
    All people do is yell, cheat, and scold.
    My heart has broken, a time to many,
    I would trade my life for a penny.
    You used to be the one, who kept me alive,
    But without you my life has taken a nosedive.
    How could you do this to me, you've left me alone,
    No more hanging out, and talking on the phone.
    My life is back to how it was,
    My life is full of lies and flaws.
    I bet no one would miss me, if I dropped dead now,
    Well, then this is my death poem, goodbye and ciao!

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • Amanda Bee
    18 years ago

    Graham Cracker Kisses
    By: Amanda Bee

    Here you come from across the room
    Still a little unsteady on your feet
    Clutching your pacifier in one hand
    Holding your bottle between two tiny teeth

    You've got your eyes on the prize
    Your radar's led you to my graham crackers
    Now there's no where for me to hide
    Here comes my little cookie snatcher

    You've anticipated my next move
    As I quickly hide them behind my back
    You simply quiver your lower lip
    Knowing I'm defenseless against such an attack

    So I go ahead and hand them over
    (Hey, I didn't really want them anyway!)
    Then you allow me to cover your face with kisses
    (Well, it's the least that you could pay.)

    With cookie crumbs on your chubby cheeks
    With cookie crumbs in your chubby fists
    You crawl up into my lap and
    Give me the sweetest graham cracker kiss

    Once again you've played unfairly
    All in order to get your way
    Once again I've let you win
    The same way I do everyday

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    Beat It Away By ItalianStallion

    Another Monday wish it was a Sunday
    I'll just say that I'm not here
    to many times before I've been caught up in a storm
    but I don't really care at all

    beat it away
    beat it away
    nobody cares what I do
    or what I say

    sometimes I feel like nothing is going right
    and the feelings here to stay
    but another day is when I feel OK
    all the feelings start to go away

    beat it away
    beat it away
    nobody cares what I do
    or what I say

    another Monday wish it was a Sunday
    I'll just say that I'm not here
    to many times before I've been caught up in a storm
    but I don't really care at all

    beat it away
    beat it away
    nobody cares what I do
    or what I say

    ~This is a Song I wrote~

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    I'll try my hardest
    by Just Rain

    (It's a song I'm making up right now)

    Everyone,this is something
    I wrote for the world to hear.
    It's something I have to bottle up.
    Something that brings up our little fears.

    ~

    I've been walking for so long
    Seeing whatever comes my way
    Nothing I can hide behind
    And still my past remains

    I don't have a million dollars
    To buy everyone's hearts
    I don't have all the world's wonders
    So what I have won't take me far

    And I know it's nothing I can't shelter all my life
    My poor eyes are as weak as my bones
    But my heart slaves away
    Day by day

    I grew up in the hardest city,and here I am clinging to nothing
    Walking an empty road that goes on and on
    Please accept me for my broken heart
    Can't tell all the words my mouth fails to say
    It can't occupy the widest pages,so my life might fade away

    Don't stop when I tell you that the world has caked my soul
    Just tell me it's okay when I don't win the gold
    Let me stay-all the way-every day
    The way I am, because I'll never be good enough

    But I'll try my hardest,try my best
    To walk the empty road when no one offers their hands
    Forever and ever and ever it'll be
    Just promise,please promise not to lose me again...

  • ~â‚£ading |nspiration~
    18 years ago

    The Game Of Life
    by ~Łost ₣airy~

    Im tired and sick of this life,
    I feel sleepy and wanna die,
    I do not have the strength to get up,
    What more to move on with my life,
    Its hurting me in and out everyday,
    I do not want to continue this game of life,
    But I cant stop once I started,
    The only way is to win this game,
    When you lose, replay the game,
    Never ever give up and continue playing,
    The more you lose,
    The more lessons youll get,
    And it will help you improve,
    The next time youre on,
    I bet youll win.

  • Drew Gold
    18 years ago

    The Breeze and I (Rictameter)

    Shaking
    and shivering,
    i heard the sticks and leaves -
    their crumbling sound of desertion -
    as you slipped between the trees and faded.
    like a tired sigh; all at once
    the breeze lifted itself
    we stood alone,
    shaking

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    The Most Beautiful Thing In The World

    The Most Beautiful Thing In The World
    Does not exist
    For it's hidden somewhere
    We can't go
    We have our opinions
    But they'll never surpass this
    As in this thing it's what everyone does not know
    It's not on earth
    Not in hell or heaven
    But don't worry
    It's here
    It's inside each and every one of us
    Just yell if you find it
    It will always be near

  • *Juicy_Secret*
    18 years ago

    IT BELONGED TO YOU......

    Long and linger without a thought,
    We met in the middle of a lip lock.
    Speechless and confused, my first kiss belonged to you,
    For me I'm in heaven, for you this makes a few.
    But this was a moment I will savor,
    For every kiss has a unique flavor.
    But I remember the one I shared with you,
    Everyone is different, now I've had my few.

    But I will always remember my first kiss ....
    ....It belonged to you

    02/24/03

    Christina Chavez© Copyright 2005

  • Katie Bennett
    18 years ago

    Suicide Asleep

    A forsaken blade
    Revealed silent pain
    Blood thirsty metal
    Is set to my vein
    I cant stop it
    This unhealthy obsession
    I've done it for years
    Without learning a lesson
    I'm coated in denial
    As the blood begins to slice
    Blood coats everything
    Touched by this harmful knife
    Blood starts dripping
    As I start to cry
    I think why I'm living
    If we're living to die
    Soaked in blood
    I lie on the floor
    I told you once
    Life isnt worth it anymore
    The room darkens
    Heavy eyelids grow
    The pain, the hurt
    I just let it go
    I los tlifes battle
    I have been beat
    Now and forever I'm
    Suicide asleep
    Katie Bennett

  • Samantha
    18 years ago

    Man, this one is hard.

    I'm not going to post runners up or anything. But all of the poems were so good...So if you didn't win, know you came close! (And I really mean that)

    Our winner: Amanda Bee.

  • Amanda Bee
    18 years ago

    Yea! I WON! Whoppee! Thank you, Insane:)