What has TV done to our children (Group Senryu)

I will be the first to say, this is beautiful...great job and you all do have beautiful talent....BUT........

I don't want to brag
And I don't want to boast
EOP Get prepared
cause those little butts
we're going to toast.
We know we can do it
we're giving it all we got
I'll promise you one thing
CC&P won't be forgot....
Winning can be good
And I hope we do
But having fun
is the name of the game..
And we always do...

We are children at hearts
Innocence filled and all
Champions of them all
Including the one posted above!

Cheerleaders for our club
Encouraging the best
Writing with all our hearts
But yet still having fun!

So bring it on again
So we can cheer we won
Another Tally mark for EOP
Beating CC&P once more.

hee hee :)

~Jacklyn

Awww.... how cute
I'll put you on mute
it might be wishful dreaming
and arrogant scheming
Just know you'll be defeated
Your victory will not be repeated
So now I stick out my tongue
and put a finger on my cheek
You'll realize this time
it's victory we seek...

* giggles* na na na na na

Yes Bob EOP's poem was awesome yet our poem was not just great. It was superb! And unfortunately for you superb beats awesome. So there you have it. We will WIN! WOO HOO!

Everyone is a winner.

What the crap is going on and why aren't i involved eh?

Who are these two groups who compete with each other?

Did i miss a meeting?

Murray it's two of the poetry clubs in the club section.

EOP is Effects of Poetry

CCP is cofffee conversation and Poetry.

if you would like to be included you could join either club. that may answer some of your ?'s

~Jacklyn

Murray:

if you want to join CCP you have to answer these ?'s though ok?

um, let's see, do you own a Rolls?
do you have 3000.00 for the registration fee?
do you have a huge butt?
are you vain?
are you a terrible writer?

if you can answer yes to 4 out of 5 then most likely you'll become a member.....lmao

Bob informed me about this... plus they wear dirty panties!

~Jacklyn

Kevin,

I think it is an easy decision, seeing where the insults are coming from! Hmmmm!

Do we know who won yet? The suspence is killing me!

Hum.... I think this group has lost. Check this:

Midriffs and tough kids
Dress up parties forsaken
Media’s triumph........ (shaedow poet)

the last line has only three (arguably four) syllables........ unless you count them as Me-di-a's tri-umph or something along those lines.
Just an opinion....

ha- ha- ha

that's three too ^^^ count them...

~Jacklyn

Me-di-a is 3 (Three) syllables.

Oh god have I lost it for the group?

No you haven't, there is nothing wrong!

Although I can't see why media WOULDN'T be three syllables. That's a bunch of c r a p that it's not.

Just ignore it!

Yes, just ignore it! Some people simply like to undermine other poets' efforts.

Sorry, my bad!