~*Who Cares?*~ contest win no matter what

hey u ppl i will read ur poems and judge them!

Here are the Rules:
1) Contest ends November 5th.
2) No explicit please. (slang and all other poems are fine though)
3)Not longer taht 40 lines please, I have a life sometimes.

Winners get:

A BRAND NEW CAR! lol jk..

1st Place- 4 comments + votes and favorite
2nd Place- 3 comments + votes and favorite
3rd Place- 2 comments +votes

Everyone will get at least 1 comment and vote, so no matter what you guys win a comment and a vote. so start adding! HAVE FUN!

~*Who Cares?*~

Quietly I stroll to my mirror,
Looking inside I see are all my fears.
What souls, so placid and cold,
Passing across my mirrors folds.
I lean in close and look in deep,
Praying to find something to keep.
Back and forth, my eyes do find,
Something to satisfy my withered mind.
Reaching into the cold shimmering glass,
My hand sinks in all too fast.
I find my arm on the other side,
To find what it is my heart abides.

My body steps through with a shuttering cry,
And I look around in fine surprise.
I glace about once more,
To find what my dear heart adores.
Something floating past my ear,
I reach out hoping this object will banish my fears.
My hands close around a mysterious thing,
And as soon as it does, it begins to sing . . .
I bring this glowing picture to my face,
And look at it with great growing haste.

I find myself looking in a mirror,
And realize I've found my greatest fear.
Reflected back to me,
Is something I never wanted to see;
A little girl bleeding from the wrist,
With a suicide note written in bliss.
So I lean closer and stare some more,
To find this little girl on the floor,
Staring at me with eyes open wide,
Begging me to be by her side.
But as much as I wish I could be,
I can not be, for this girl is me.

The Elegy of the Lovers
by HansRik

I cannot say in words how much I've loved
For words help not t'express the lover's wish.
Canst thou not see the pain of being unloved?
Or more the languid dolence we anguish?

Now I have lost yon opportunity,
The fire of love has burned this heart of mine
Crying, waning, yonder atrocities
Committed for love, for this thought of thine.

But I shall make myself an oak that stands
Upon thy doors and howls thy name fore'er.
And nevermore this pain will understand,
The love I have for thee, my dear girl.

The hills that sing and dream about thy love
Think not that they shall be eroded, yea,
The willows chant their elegy forgone,
And rot in fetid, rancid ideals.

And walkest thou in vainest thoughts and lies,
Laughing at the trees and hills that, for you, died.
Waiting for mine heart to expire its last sighs.

How beautiful thou seem'st outside,
The sun is but a phantom by thy side.

But nay!

Thy soul is cruel and cold, like the darkest night.

When i look at me in the mirror what do i see
i see the real me
the one they cant find
the one behind the smile
the one with the tears
the one with the years left to face

when i look at me in the mirror what do i wish to see
i wish to see the girl you see
the girl you think i am
the one who trys so hard
the one who stays above
the one who is important
the one who it is you love

but i cant see her cuz thats not me

i no thats who you saw and thats who i was, once, but im not her any more!

Trails of Missed Oportunity

What pleasant weather the day has bestoyed
A smooth breeze trickles up my spine
I notice you, encircled by an atmospheric glow
Your hair floating about, as if it was weightless

with every graceful step hence
My body's quivers grow more intense
Yearning to come in your acquaintance
As the sand shifts under your sandals

If I merely am blessed in your presence much longer
I know my head will float off into the clouds
My self-control, a perceptible bother
I must approach you with the most precise utterance

Casually, I walk closer, in a most demure style
Hoping my excitement is inconspicuous
You flashed me the most deafening smile
Instantly, I'm entranced in your heavenly accent

While in my tranquil state of affection
You passed by me rather passively
I had carelessly missed my chance for perfection
Like an angelic mirage, you disappeared

She left me one thing, nonetheless
Something to remember her by
In that calm breeze, surrounding my lack of finesse
Her flowery perfume encroached the air

Empty Cry

Below a crimson sky,
A river of blood,
An empty cry.
Is it my fault,
Or are you blind,
Have you simply decided to leave the truth behind?
Is it because Ive worked so hard,
I actually succeeded,
Is it jealousy,
Your secret, petty envy,
Or is it your true black of heart?
When did it all start
At what point did I realize,
You arent all perfect either,
You make harsh judgments,
Over no evidence at all,
You always think your so tall,
But take away your cape,
Rip away the mask,
Your as short as me,
And you probably know it, too.

So leave the criticism behind,
Look at me like I am,
Can you see,
Would you look at me if I was suffering,
Or would you turn away,
Pretending you couldnt see,
Because its something ugly,
That doesnt fit in your perfect world,
But see this,
Its the suffering you caused.
So look at it, see it there, and accept it.
Its who I am, and what you did to me.

all gr8 poems so far...only 2 days left!
~*Who Cares?*~

Thought of YOU Again
by ~Łost ₣airy~

As I close my eyes and tried to sleep last night,
The image of yours keeps lingering in my head,
I recall those moments we spent together,
Staying after school, just to talk to each other.

It burns my cheek when the tears fall from my eyes,
As I wonder if you ever thought of me,
It seems to me that you don't care,
All you ever wanted is to be with my best friend.

I think my biggest mistake I made so far,
Is I love you the same way you love her,
I've seen you suffer because of her,
And I do not wish to suffer because of you!

Before you found out the truth about me,
That the guy I love is actually you,
You once told me that you don't want me to get hurt,
But why is it you are the one who keeps hurting me.

We were never together, and I know we will never be,
I accept this fact, all I want was to have our friendship back,
It doesn't hurt me that the one you love is her not me,
It hurts me that you just can't seem to care about me.

My friends keep telling me that you are not worth it,
And deep down I know I should have let go,
But how can I, when you are still holding on,
On a love that can't possibly be obtained.

left behind

Cold unseeing eyes,
Staring, forever staring at nothing,
This is what has become of him,
No more shall he suffer,
No more lies to endure,
For he has gone,
Gone and left us behind,
Left us in this uncaring world,
Left us alone, forever here,
Long we still must suffer,
More lies we shall be told,
For we are still here,
We were left behind.

Your Wedding Night
By: Amanda Bee

Tonight is your wedding night
A night of sensuality
The night for you to show him
That you two are truly meant to be

So choose the perfect dress, girl
A dress of silk and lace
Now meticulously curl your hair
Making sure each strand is in its place

Spray on your sweet perfume
And carefully rouge your lips
He’ll undoubtedly notice
The subtle sway of your hips

As you meet him in the bedroom
Remember to reticently bat your eyes
Then throw him a seductive smile
Watch as he’s taken by surprise

Anxiously await his touch
Feel the heat of his body, so near
As you blush so prettily
While he nibbles on your ear

Allow him to undress you
All the while your eyes will meet
Then look down at your silky dress
As it puddles at your feet

Feel the sheets upon your skin
As he lays you on the bed
Close your eyes and take him in
Engrave these memories into your head

All you’ll hear is the sound of passion
As your bodies interlace
As you both make your way to ecstasy
Pause to look upon his face

For you’ll be sure to see the love there
And his faithful pledge will be in sight
For your future holds so much promise
Beginning with your wedding night

Complete For Now...
by ~Łost ₣airy~

My sadness has faded away,
But who knows when it's coming back,
My happiness is just an inch away,
Waiting for me to just reach out and grab.

The old me has long been gone,
The person standing right in front of you,
Is nobody but a girl meant to be,
The girl that dreams of inspiring others.

You are once my inspiration,
But then I realize you're nothing but a jerk,
So I made a promise to myself,
That I'll live my life better than yours.

This year has been so difficult for me,
Going through all of this love and hate,
Is only making me weaker day by day,
How many times I wish I can just drop dead.

But this year too I learn many things,
The value of friendship and the joy poems bring,
Makes me realize that my life is wonderful after all,
And that I have to fulfill my destiny of living a life without regret.

Nobody says it's going to be easy,
As I try hard not to drive others crazy,
All those cursing and scolding I no longer care,
For its being said by someone who doesn't care.

I find joy not in hate neither it is in anger or death,
The joy I have is simply the joy I give,
To those lonely soul that waits for an angel,
As they open their heart and see with it.

As I grew up each passing years,
I realize I had shed countless tears,
And so I wish with the hope I have,
I'll put a smile on those who frown.

Others inspired me to live a blissful life,
So I hope I'll inspire others to live my life,
That are filled with mysteries and dreams as well,
Nothing but happiness and happiness alone.

ok ya'll contest is CLOSED...ill tri n have the results 2morro..but it mite b munday cuz i have a busy day....thnx every1 4 participating!
~*Who Carse?*~

ok:

3rd Place- Amanda Bee
2nd Place-Dark Suicide
1st Place- Lost Fairy

so u guysget extra stuff...but all of u get 1 comment/vote! congrats 2 every1!

Who Cares - Thanks for the comment...Congrats Amanda.

Yay...third place thanks Who Cares. And congratulations to you too Dark Suicide. And to you Lost Fairy

Thank you...