Hey Sunny, or anyone from that other club...lol

  • Atomic
    18 years ago

    Okay, someone please explain to me what poverty is....

    State of being poor? Lack of money? What is it?

    Yeah, my English isn't -that- good...

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    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • Jacklyn
    18 years ago

    awesome sounds like fun! ok so three days starting tomarrow? or today (thursday?)

    ~Jacklyn

  • Amanda Bee
    18 years ago

    Oooo, oooo. I so want to play this one. Sunny call my name next okay?!?!?

  • Jacklyn
    18 years ago

    everyone is a winner! that's what it says above lol.

    finished my poem now.

    ~Jacklyn

  • Lydie
    18 years ago

    PICNICS YOU HAVE GOT TO BE JOKING
    lol
    ok i'll try...

    -Lyd

  • Jacklyn
    18 years ago

    ice skating wasn't all that bad. Bob said i could post my poem now so i will...

    Graceful Struggles

    She falls…
    Leaving her grace,
    while venting angers
    sorting her troubles
    craving forgiveness

    She falls…
    Opening her wounds
    all emotional
    her simple way to deal
    to skate them away

    She falls…
    On the hard ice
    drenched with sweat
    refusing to give in
    proving resistance.

    She falls…
    More vulnerable than before
    pain builds up slow
    as she skates hours more
    Realizing she's not as strong

    She gets up…
    Learning to forgive
    to heal and move on
    Learning she's not alone
    She skates with grace again.

    ~Jacklyn

  • Jacklyn
    18 years ago

    go Britt! nice poem!

    ~Jacklyn

  • Amanda Bee
    18 years ago

    Oooo teaching! A topic that I LOVE! lol

    Bob...you guys better be afraid!

    NICE POEM BRITT!!!! You go GIRL! Go CCP!!! WOOO!

    (As you can see, I totally have team spirit!!)

  • Lu
    18 years ago

    Great job Jacklyn and Britt ....

    Both poems were awesome ....
    Way to go Britt ......Woot Woot

  • Cory Mastrandrea
    18 years ago

    Ok, I wont be able to post anything til the weekend is up caus i have no internet at home, so if you dont see my poem for a few days don't be impatient.

  • Atomic
    18 years ago

    Question for Bob or Sunny:

    Once we are done with the poems, can we just post it or do we have to wait until one of your guys say so?

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    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • Atomic
    18 years ago

    ......NOOOOOoooooo!!!! I don't wanna post mine now!

    For Love or Money
    by â—Š Atomic â—Š

    Our family has so little,
    But we couldn't care less.
    We earned what little we have,
    Because we always tried our best.

    Sure people look down upon us,
    But we learn better not to care.
    Why should we trash our emotions,
    For someone who was never there?

    We don't have a lot of much,
    But we have enough to get us by.
    We have the richest thing of all,
    Something that lives on once we die.

    Many people don't have it,
    Most people crave for it long.
    Those who have it don't cherish it,
    Until they see it's gone.

    Money can't make it stay,
    People make it stronger.
    Holding on tight kills it fast,
    Give it wings and it'll last longer.

    Poverty of love or poverty of money,
    Which path would you take?
    For poverty of love guarantees you,
    Your heart can never break.

    But would you risk it all for that?
    All that can never be?
    Because you chose the wrong path,
    To live your life lonely?

    Now poverty of money,
    Means you can risk it all.
    Risk the chances to hurt,
    To trip yourself and fall.

    Which do you desire more?
    The things you desperately need.
    Or the things you foolishly want?
    Or both because of greed?

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    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!©

  • Atomic
    18 years ago

    Yeah, thanks. =)

    I was wrong for under-estimating Musicaility....

    I do apologize for that.

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    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • Lu
    18 years ago

    Wow ...
    You both did an incredible job ...

  • Ann Stareyes
    18 years ago

    A Picnic To Remember
    by Ann *Stareyes*

    The breeze softly blowing
    The sun beginning to set
    We planned our picnic at the park
    One I knew we'd never forget.

    We snuggled under the stars
    And I kissed your sweet lips
    I threw out the blanket
    I was surely losing grip.

    We sat and reminisced
    For all the time we lost
    You always were my heart
    Regardless of what life tossed.

    Our meal now before us
    Fried Chicken and Baked beans too
    Chocolate meringue pie
    That was just as sweet as you.

    Then we created a new recipe
    Love filled with desire
    Added a whole lot of passion
    That drove us completely wild.

    We gazed upon the stars
    I feed you with delight
    Then came those sweet candy kisses
    I hated to say good bye.

    This picnic was a blast
    As we exited under the moon
    Now forever in each others heart
    Love that will prosper and bloom...

  • Lydie
    18 years ago

    OMG Ann that was awesome. I just wrote mine and I was like ok it's alright and now I know it's shocking....

    Here goes....

    'Beyond the good old days'

    That Sunday
    it came
    once a year
    I always thought
    it was ages away
    but slowly it grew near

    the one Sunday
    brought us all
    back yet again
    this had been going on
    for a few years now
    us group of ten

    such a group of friends
    from a young age
    we never thought we'd seperate
    but when we did
    Sophie gave the call
    I guess it was simply fate

    so despite the wind
    despite the rain
    every year we still came
    ever year with more stories
    we were a bit different
    but still mostly the same

    we met at the park
    at precisely
    10 O'clock
    none of us were ever late
    we put the rug down
    beside the rock

    put out all the food
    and began the picnic
    all telling our news
    I knew that these people
    always were
    the friends I would never lose.

    -Lyd

  • Ann Stareyes
    18 years ago

    You done a great job Lydie...we had to add a little spice to it in order to bring it alive...Everyone has done a great job with their topics also....Great job everyone.

    Love Ann

  • Ann Stareyes
    18 years ago

    Thanks Bob....but we'll never compare to you....You are the just the king of Poetry in many eyes and hearts....

    Love ya, Ann

  • Lu
    18 years ago

    Lydia & Ann ....
    Both poems are absolutely winners ....
    Beautiful pieces ...

  • HOLLY ARMER
    18 years ago

    Okay here's mine. Thanks Bob for the title!

    Liquified Harmony

    Writing a poem about
    something I've never done
    I can't think of anything
    that could be more fun

    I envision it all
    as if I'm right there
    A wonderful raft has
    replaced this old chair

    The sun is shining
    as the brisk wind blows
    Snuggled in my life vest
    as the anticipation grows

    Surrounded by friends
    but still scared to death
    The rapids are ahead
    I take a deep breath

    Holding tight to the oar
    with a prayer on my lips
    We hit the first wave
    and the raft sways and dips

    Freezing water like ice
    douses my face
    We continue at
    an incredible pace

    Roughing the rapids
    as my adrenaline pumps
    Feeling each movement
    of surges and bumps

    Much like a roller coaster
    it's definitely new
    Amazed that I know
    just what to do

    Who would've thought
    I'd be so great
    A professional river rafter
    Oh....heck....wait

    Looking around
    I'm back in my chair
    It was only a fantasy
    I was not really there

    My oar has been replaced
    by a notebook and pen
    It's hard to believe
    that was all just pretend

    It was so exhilarating
    and let me just say
    I can't wait to go rafting
    for real someday

    I have to say thank you to Bob and Sunny for putting this together. I was so dumbfounded with my topic, but it was a blast to write. Thanks for taking the time to keep us motivated~Holly

  • Anthony
    18 years ago

    Hey is it too late to want to participate? if not, SIGN ME UP BABY!!!!

    ~Anthony

  • HOLLY ARMER
    18 years ago

    Oh I like those! Especially Liquified Harmony! I think that's the one....Thanks much~Holly

  • Jacklyn
    18 years ago

    wow, i've been gone for over twentyfour hours and am running on two hours of sleep, which my body is so not use too! my eyes are like so tired. the poems were great for everyones! i took the time and read all of them! a job well done. this was a really fun idea to do between the clubs!

    ~Jacklyn

  • Atomic
    18 years ago

    Thanks Meg!

    No wonder I didn't recognized you.

    So are you the Meg who was "Where's your boy tonight?"

    I like your new name.

    And your poem was very, very good M'Dear. =)

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    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • Jacklyn
    18 years ago

    "Love~Luck~n~Happiness
    Musicality aka Megan :-)
    ^
    l

    Bet ya didn't know it was me with a changed name lol! Congrats to everyone!"

    ha ha hai sure didn't notice in our club!

    hey bob are we aloud to volunter for a second time if no one else from our group wants to go?

    ~Jacklyn

  • Jacklyn
    18 years ago

    great poem satin! reminds me of when i was in Colorado all over again. beautiful place!

    ~Jacklyn

  • Cherri
    18 years ago

    HAHAHA, Bob, be nice.

    -*-Cherri-*-

  • HOLLY ARMER
    18 years ago

    Very nice Satin! Sounds like you've actually been river rafting before. Lovely imagery, the whole piece just came to life!
    Someone answer Jacklyn's question about doing more than one challenge if there are no more volunteers from our group. I'd love to do another one as well!

  • HOLLY ARMER
    18 years ago

    Well, if Bob has no objections then he can put Jacklyn and then me down to challenge the next two in your club!
    I'm so excited. This is more fun than I thought it would be. I mean when I got my topic, I thought forget this. But the challenge made it that much better!

  • Lu
    18 years ago

    Life Within My Flower Garden
    by ~..Luanne..~
    Topic : Flower gardens

    Oh my pretty , pretty ones
    babies I've tended to from seed
    gently nourishing your soil
    protecting you from weed

    You gracefully break the surface
    showing life up through the earth
    bring pride and tranquility
    to my soul at your birth

    I surrounded you with rocks
    painted a pretty pink
    sprinkled you with water
    a thirst quenching drink

    I sit beside your beauty
    as day turns into night
    mesmerized by your colors
    of purple , pink and white

    How you've grown into a family
    daisies and marigolds intertwined
    never a more magnificent sight
    to the eyes of all mankind

    Oh my beautiful flower garden
    flourished beneath my watchful eye
    your blooms destined to soon shed
    through sorrowed tears I say good-bye

    November has brought cold
    frost , the end to your year
    but I'll see you all next summer
    when you magically reappear

  • Steven Beesley
    18 years ago

    OK Sunny, Bob wanted a piece of me, so what's my topic and I'll make sure that he chews his own butt!

  • Lydie
    18 years ago

    Isn't it amazing what good work people can come up with when you put your mind to it?

    Well done everyone! All the poems in this thread kick A**

    -Lyd

  • Bill Turner
    18 years ago

    MUSIC?????? okay!

  • Cherri
    18 years ago

    Gots any chocolate in there? I crave chocolate, it's my favorite pregnancy food! lol

    -*-Cherri-*-

  • Jacklyn
    18 years ago

    just got the topic i was given for my second one, intresting topic, i have a bunch of ideas in my head already!

    ~Jacklyn

  • Chelsey
    18 years ago

    LMao...quilts?....quilts?!...oh gracious!!!...well time to call grandma to get some ideas...

  • Jacklyn
    18 years ago

    i can think of a couple of creative ideas for quilts. i'm sure you'll do fine. i might just try the topic myself for the challenge.

    ~Jacklyn

  • Chelsey
    18 years ago

    Ohhhhhh Kristy just killed it!! I loved that girl!!!!

    Animals are important
    They should not be abused
    When this happens to humans
    We feel hurt and confused

    That part gave me chills!!! Such truth spoken..a powerful write my friend!

  • Steven Beesley
    18 years ago

    Bob, just emailed you and Sunny my effort for Water Pollution.

  • Atomic
    18 years ago

    Oi! Something happy, torture Anthony once more!

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    (")-(") Arrivederci!