A very serious question...

hey guys, I have been told that I'm plagarizing. Since this is a very touchy matter, I came to ask if my new poem is breaking this site most forbidden rule. The case, if my poem "Don't ever question that" is just a cheap imitation to Atmosphere's (in turn is my favorite group) "Don't ever fucking question that"

I'll even provide links
Atmosphere's http://www.getsomelyrics.com/lyrics/Atmosphere/Don%2527t%2BEver%2BFucking%2BQuestion%2BThat.html

mine
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?id=526192

Yes, I got the idea from this poem from him. Yes, it was about a true event that occured in my life, and yes there are traces of his song in my poem. But I wanna ask ya'll if this is truly plagarizing. If you guys still say its too close or is, I'll take the poem down from this site and never put it up again. It will stay in the confinement of my notebook.

damn... if the next person says it is so. I'll take it down. If no one answers, I'll take it down.

Yep i'd say that's plaigiarizing.

Alright... *sighs* Its going down.

Damn, thats the last time I write with songs blasting in my ears. O well, I guess I'll make one from scratch again. Promise to all, I'll make one thats so original and full of that same emotion that was put into my past poems. Promise, and thanks to you two kind persons.

Lol, don't worry. I can't write with music in the background. I start writing things that are in the song. Just in different words.

yea, same here, that's what happened with me. It's just that he (atmosphere's slug) and I (and probably half of the population of guys that heared) have witnesed such harsh heartache. It's like what he raps about in his songs, I'm going through at that moment.
"I wanna stand on top of this mountain and yell"
"I wanna wake up and break up this lake of hell"