I'll give honest, thorough critiques.

  • Lucy Loves Not
    20 years ago

    Please leave the title of ONE poem here, and I will gladly read and comment. I prefer not to vote, so i will not do so unless you ask me to. Also, if you feel you can offer worthwhile comments, please read my poem "Littered Time" and tell me what you think. If not, that's just fine, too.

    Lucy Loves Not

    --Please do not leave requests for CUTTING/SUICIDAL poems. I will not read them.

  • gorgeouslilmissy
    20 years ago

    can you pleasecomment on.. Meeting You [Tim]
    thanks xx

  • Anthony
    20 years ago

    Hi could you read "Those who make life worth it" and "Their Love For Me ON Halt"? thanks very mucho!

    ~Anthony

  • Lucy Loves Not
    20 years ago

    apathetic.....you are so funny. thanks for reading my poem....I'll check out a couple of yours.

    Lucy Loves Not

  • Lucy Loves Not
    20 years ago

    Anthony....I will only read ONE as the post said originally.
    Everyone else.....I'm all done =)

    Anyone else?

  • amelia
    20 years ago

    love is where you are

  • marinecorps0405
    20 years ago

    could u please rate and comment my poem
    watching them fall.
    id appreciate it.
    thx!

  • CinnamonTwirl
    20 years ago

    "And Pain Currently"

    thank so much, ill hope to returnin the favor now...which i guess is ahead of the game, but whatever

  • A Heart Losing Hope
    20 years ago

    its one three parter if your up for that its called How About You, if not then go for any one that looks interesting to you, they are all, minus one, love poems about my gf hehe thanks ;)

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    "The Heart of the Eyes"

    Thanks ahead of time M'Dear. =)

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • BeeJay
    20 years ago

    "Love At First Sight"

    Please and thanksya muches in advance!

    ~BJ~

  • Truest Lies
    20 years ago

    Please could you comment on Nighttime Seagull.
    It isn't a poem strictly about anything, though there is a mention of suicidal death, so it is your decision, to read it or not.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • StormyWeather
    20 years ago

    Could you please comment on 'Only Human'
    It's not on suicide or cutting

    Thank you :D