i'll vote 3 of ur poems if u comment 1 of mine

yeah thts right...
i'll vote on 3 of ur poems if u comment & vote my poem

"love is where you are"

i NEVER vote poems less than 3...im not cruel...
i hardly remeber voting even 4...
if u'd rather like me to comment on ur poem... i'll not vote... i'll comment...
pls post... i keep checking & u can watch ur votes getting better...
i'll vote ur 3 of ur latest...
lemme know
post post
love
amy

come on ppl start posting

& i'll start voting....

waiting 4 ur comments on my poem :-)
as i said i dont mind commenting on one of ur poems...if u care less bout votes !

hey, when i do yours could you comment and vote plz. thanx

i did it..it was great i would appreciate it if u would v/c on my 3 latest

will be done...
any more ppl intereseted ?

im done with everyone here...waiting for more posts.. !

I already commented before, so it's a damn shame.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

im done with everyone
nice poems

any more interested?

yeah ill comment on urs now if u can comment and vote back
cheers
:)
x

will do emily...

I left comments and votes on 3 of your poems today:
I will not be a mistake
Murder or suicide?
Love is where you are... !

I seldom comment or vote on any poems unless I particularly like them. Your poems are beautiful and I am sure I will be returning to read more.
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Re: I will not be a mistake

I do have a suggestion for the last 2 lines. First, the use of the word GOT her is improper. You could substitute HAVE and it would be correct.

However, I think the impact of the ending also the flow could be improved as follows.

I’ll have nights to remember
Even long after you’ve gone.

Like I say, it’s a suggestion. And whether you make that change or not, it is still a beautiful poem.

thanks lydia

your poems r excellent as well... im unable to comment on ur love poems some server problem
but they r real good !

Thank you, Amelia. I have had the same problem with log-ons in the love poems section. But I do appreciate your taking the time to read the poems.