I NEED YOU TO COMMENT...please, its important

So, I wrote a poem called "And pain currently" and its about like, its basically a short, heartfelt poem on a break up, or...he didnt call it a break up, he said its a "break" and I need yalll to comment and tell me what u think before i show him the poem.

And as always, I return comments and votes. thankx yall.